Editing Services

Screenplay editing and Page One analysis

Every screenplay deserves to be read at its very best. Whether you’re polishing a draft before sending it out, tightening dialogue, or making sure your structure hits the right beats, I provide detailed editing and feedback to help your script stand out. My services cover the full range of screenplay editing, including:

Formatting & Presentation: Ensuring your script looks professional, with clean layout and consistency throughout.

Grammar & Clarity: Fixing errors, awkward phrasing, and smoothing the read so nothing distracts from your story.

Style & Flow: Strengthening action lines, dialogue, and pacing to create a vivid, engaging read from start to finish.

Storytelling Support: Feedback on character, structure, and narrative impact to sharpen your script at every level.

Interested? Drop me a line via the main site and let's get your pages shining.

Want to try me out? Take advantage of my FREE "PAGE ONE" taster offer (see below).


Free Page One Analysis: To give you a taste of how I work, I offer a free detailed edit of your first page (if I love it I might even read more). This line-by-line feedback highlights formatting, grammar, verb choice, clarity, and style—helping you see how small changes can make a big difference.

Satisfaction Guarantee

100% Satisfaction Guarantee: The Page One service is completely free. If you find the feedback valuable, you might consider buying me a coffee—and with it, you’ll also receive a free copy of my eBook on screenplay structure.

Whether you’re just starting out or refining your final draft, my aim is to give you practical, constructive feedback that helps your screenplay shine.

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FREE EDIT OF PAGE ONE:

To give you a taste of how I work, I offer a free detailed edit of your first page. If I love it I'll even read more. This line-by-line feedback is annotated on your original screenplay pages, accompanied by a separate report that highlights formatting, grammar, verb choice, clarity, and style.